Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

This is the chorus of a worship song (my first to be exact) I wrote a few days ago, and I was wondering what you guys think. Here it is:

Beautiful and Blessed
Great and Priceless Treasure
Grace beyond all measure
You're everything I need
Powerful and Mighty
Mercy you have shown me
Author of all mystery
You're everything I need
You're everything I need

I'm considering uploading it to YouTube, but I'm not sure cause I wouldn't want someone to go around saying that it's their song. Do you think I should? I already have it on my computer (I'm listening to it right now =D), so it wouldn't take much to get it ready to upload.

So, what's your opinion? I really would love feedback, even if it's a bit of conscructive criticism, I really want/need it!

-Doggie

It's pretty good :)

Thanks =)

I LOVE it!!
It's really good! Whether you post it on Youtube is your choice since it's your song, but if your worried someone might take it then you can always add after the video that you've copyrighted it. :)

Thanks! I'm entering it in a song competition that my church is having =)

That's really good! Why is it in the fiction section? He is no fictional character!

That's absolutely true! =) I actually didn't notice that "Original Stories" was under fiction until just now xD Well, I'm a mod now, so I can move it xD

*Moved to "Music"*

Thanks! I actually wrote another one a few days ago xD It's based on verses from a few of the Psalms that King David wrote =) Here's some of it:

He has dealt
Bountifully with me
I will sing to the Lord
He will keep us
He will guard us
Hallelujah!
I will sing to the Lord

Whaddya think?

OHMIGOSH!!!!!!!! Sorry to double post, but ya know how I entered Everything I Need in a song writing competition? I WON!!!!!!! =D

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! =D
That's sooo cool!! Woot!

DoggieGirl808 wrote:Thanks! I actually wrote another one a few days ago xD It's based on verses from a few of the Psalms that King David wrote =) Here's some of it:

He has dealt
Bountifully with me
I will sing to the Lord
He will keep us
He will guard us
Hallelujah!
I will sing to the Lord

Whaddya think?

I like this one too! Awesome! =)

Thank youuu =) They gave me a $25 VISA, so I officially have money again xD

Oh I think I forgot to mention that my song won 2nd place in the competition that my area's music people have every year. They had live judging from some of the "big wig" music/songwriting people in my church--so awesome! It really inspired me.