Love Times Four (poem, I might make it into a song)

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Love Times Four (poem, I might make it into a song)

Post by DoggieGirl808 on Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:26 am

Lately my head
Is soaring through clouds
Like it's never soared before
What is this soaring?
Love times four

What I feel
I've never felt before
What is this feeling?
Love times four

What happens
When you cross:
A bad boy
A sweet guy
A funny boy
A dream guy?
Not craziness
Not insanity
Not the end of the world
Or humanity
What do you get?
Love times four

None could be
More different than them!
One loves singing,
And one would rather die.
One loves football,
And one made me cry.

None could look
More different than them!
One has brown hair,
One has black.
One's tall,
One's short.

What could
Four totally different boys
Have in common?
Simple
They all
Make me smile
They all
Take my breath away
They all
Make me look twice
But most of all
They all
Have my heart <3
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It's not done yet, but what do you think so far? I know, it needs work, but I'm liking it so far. =)

-Doggie Razz

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Post by Pollytoad on Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:57 am

Looks great! (I'm guessing this is about you? xD) big smile
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:33 pm

Thanks (lol yes can't help it! they can drive me nuts in both directions! xD)

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