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Post by yeahstevex on Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:45 pm

I'm keeping careful count
Of what has come and gone,
And I'm already up one hundred
But let's mess it up some more.

I just think that you're the
One I need
To be the best I am
For us to be alive.

You're so
I can't even
Explain it.
And when I try to open my eyes,
Your eyes just berate them.

I open up to talk
And you steal the words form beneath me,
Sitting, smiling, staring.
I love you that much more.

Now I'm up to a thousand,
I'm so far away from where
I had started.
How did I get here so fast?

So when you let those words
Escape from your lips,
I counted to a million.

A long time from then,
I was still going.
And your lips were on mine,
But you made me lose count.

I never started again.
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Re: 1,000,000

Post by Pollytoad on Thu Nov 19, 2009 3:40 pm

Great poem! :)
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