Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

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Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by DoggieGirl808 on Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:10 am

This is the chorus of a worship song (my first to be exact) I wrote a few days ago, and I was wondering what you guys think. Here it is:

Beautiful and Blessed
Great and Priceless Treasure
Grace beyond all measure
You're everything I need
Powerful and Mighty
Mercy you have shown me
Author of all mystery
You're everything I need
You're everything I need


I'm considering uploading it to YouTube, but I'm not sure cause I wouldn't want someone to go around saying that it's their song. Do you think I should? I already have it on my computer (I'm listening to it right now =D), so it wouldn't take much to get it ready to upload.

So, what's your opinion? I really would love feedback, even if it's a bit of conscructive criticism, I really want/need it!

-Doggie


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Re: Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by Switchfoot on Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:34 pm

It's pretty good :)
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Re: Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by DoggieGirl808 on Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:45 pm

Thanks =)

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Re: Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by Pollytoad on Fri Jan 29, 2010 9:08 pm

I LOVE it!!
It's really good! Whether you post it on Youtube is your choice since it's your song, but if your worried someone might take it then you can always add after the video that you've copyrighted it. :)
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:19 pm

Thanks! I'm entering it in a song competition that my church is having =)

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Post by hoodedwarbler12 on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:31 pm

That's really good! Why is it in the fiction section? He is no fictional character!
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:34 pm

That's absolutely true! =) I actually didn't notice that "Original Stories" was under fiction until just now xD Well, I'm a mod now, so I can move it xD

*Moved to "Music"*

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Post by Pollytoad on Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:56 pm

DoggieGirl808 wrote:Thanks! I'm entering it in a song competition that my church is having =)

That's so cool! Good luck!
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Re: Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by DoggieGirl808 on Wed Feb 10, 2010 11:21 am

Thanks! I actually wrote another one a few days ago xD It's based on verses from a few of the Psalms that King David wrote =) Here's some of it:

He has dealt
Bountifully with me
I will sing to the Lord
He will keep us
He will guard us
Hallelujah!
I will sing to the Lord


Whaddya think?

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Re: Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by DoggieGirl808 on Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:05 pm

OHMIGOSH!!!!!!!! Sorry to double post, but ya know how I entered Everything I Need in a song writing competition? I WON!!!!!!! =D

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Re: Everything I Need (part of an original song of mine)

Post by Pollytoad on Tue Mar 02, 2010 4:43 pm

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! =D
That's sooo cool!! Woot!

DoggieGirl808 wrote:Thanks! I actually wrote another one a few days ago xD It's based on verses from a few of the Psalms that King David wrote =) Here's some of it:

He has dealt
Bountifully with me
I will sing to the Lord
He will keep us
He will guard us
Hallelujah!
I will sing to the Lord


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I like this one too! Awesome! =)
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:43 pm

Thank youuu =) They gave me a $25 VISA, so I officially have money again xD

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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:57 pm

Oh I think I forgot to mention that my song won 2nd place in the competition that my area's music people have every year. They had live judging from some of the "big wig" music/songwriting people in my church--so awesome! It really inspired me.

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