I can't keep on doing this anymore....

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I can't keep on doing this anymore....

Post by DoggieGirl808 on Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:41 pm

We've been friends since the beginning
All was fine
Until you decided to show me
Your dark side

It started with shunning
And just being rude
If only this
Was the end of it
But it gets much worse

Next came slaps
And words sharp as arrows
They pierced my heart
Deep, deep they went
But that wasn't the end
Much, much worse you sent

Now it's swearing
Ridiculing humiliation
Countless lies
We started out close
But now there's
A canyon between us

My old wounds never healed
My heart is terribly scarred
But you multiply the pain
With each and every thrust

I don't know if things
Will ever be the same again
If you and me
Will be good friends
Ever again

What the future holds
Is a mystery to me
Whether we will be together
Or miles apart
All I want now
Is to mend my broken heart

What ever that may be
What ever is in store
I just have to say
I can't keep on doing this anymore

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Post by Pollytoad on Tue Dec 01, 2009 7:47 pm

aww, that is so sad......
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Tue Dec 01, 2009 8:58 pm

yeah, true story too. Buuuuuuuut, like in many stories, I think this is the chapter where everything starts turning around for the better =D

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Post by Pollytoad on Tue Dec 01, 2009 9:11 pm

Really? =D
I'm so glad!!
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:09 pm

Yeah, me too!! When that starts happening, I might even add to this poem, but idk....

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Post by Pollytoad on Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:23 pm

Or you can make another poem that's a sequel! Like you're finishing the sentence:

I can't keep doing this anymore.......[Insert New Poem name here]
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Post by Switchfoot on Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:38 pm

that's so sad....
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Post by DoggieGirl808 on Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:28 pm

Yeah, but it's definitely turning around for the better =D

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